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diff --git a/_Outline.txt b/_Outline.txt index d1a6499..c23f635 100644 --- a/_Outline.txt +++ b/_Outline.txt @@ -14,4 +14,16 @@ Okay so the men were based in the Carribean, the official details of what happen This isn't Nazi gold buried the basement of some bank or wherever vandamere bush put his gold. This was money stolen from the french government by a us navy officer who them had himself surgically altered and returned home under a false name. -They talk about why Chase does it, establish him as a nerdy guy in wool sweater vest maybe, based on the character from Rubicon. They go to lunch and then a man gives Nicole a name, she goes back and runs it through the WWII database, it isn't there. She goes to the files and finds the man's file, but there's nothing in it. She meets with the mysterious stranger again (the first time they meet he gives her a piece of chalk and tells her to mark a bench and he will be in touch with her), he gives her some more to go on and she goes to the Archives where she finds enlistment papers, enough to know that he was a soldier. Then she goes to his squadron headquarters in Annapolis and finds more record, though not much, just that he was shipped to Panama in 1941 to protect the canal and the gulf. Also search and rescue for the marines that were training on the beaches there in preparation for action in the south pacific. She goes back to her boss and tell him the story, he says she can work the case, but that she had to take on the other new case as well, so she does and they end up being connected maybe? Maybe not, maybe she just ignores that case and everyone int he office starts liking her more because the boss is getting more and more pissed at her because she's.. or even better the boss says no to her request, gives her the file she's supposed to be assigned to and then she goes back to the mystery man and he does something such that her boss comes back to her and says, okay, you can work that case, though he obviously doesn't want her to do it all so then everyone starts to like her because the boss no longer does, though he can't do anything about it. Then she works it some more, uncovers a bit more but hits another wall and goes back to the mystery man to tell him there's just nothing on the guy. He's the one who says she needs to go to Panama, give her Sil Hawkard's name and number, she flies down and meets up with Sil on his boat.
\ No newline at end of file +They talk about why Chase does it, establish him as a nerdy guy in wool sweater vest maybe, based on the character from Rubicon. They go to lunch and then a man gives Nicole a name, she goes back and runs it through the WWII database, it isn't there. She goes to the files and finds the man's file, but there's nothing in it. She meets with the mysterious stranger again (the first time they meet he gives her a piece of chalk and tells her to mark a bench and he will be in touch with her), he gives her some more to go on and she goes to the Archives where she finds enlistment papers, enough to know that he was a soldier. Then she goes to his squadron headquarters in Annapolis and finds more record, though not much, just that he was shipped to Panama in 1941 to protect the canal and the gulf. Also search and rescue for the marines that were training on the beaches there in preparation for action in the south pacific. She goes back to her boss and tell him the story, he says she can work the case, but that she had to take on the other new case as well, so she does and they end up being connected maybe? Maybe not, maybe she just ignores that case and everyone int he office starts liking her more because the boss is getting more and more pissed at her because she's.. or even better the boss says no to her request, gives her the file she's supposed to be assigned to and then she goes back to the mystery man and he does something such that her boss comes back to her and says, okay, you can work that case, though he obviously doesn't want her to do it all so then everyone starts to like her because the boss no longer does, though he can't do anything about it. Then she works it some more, uncovers a bit more but hits another wall and goes back to the mystery man to tell him there's just nothing on the guy. He's the one who says she needs to go to Panama, give her Sil Hawkard's name and number, she flies down and meets up with Sil on his boat. + +SO let's go back to the UBoot story, that sounds better to me right now, but instead of moving nazi gold, it's full of mazi french moving the french gold witha skeleton crew. So Reese rescues them, but his navigator has to stay on the boat because there's too much weight. The navigator and captain make a deal to being the sub into shallower waters and sink it so they can come back and recover it. But then the french captain dies in an auto accident and Reese disappears in the Korean war, leaving only the senator's grandfather who is the bad guy that takes some of the gold and starts his empire. So who knows about the gold and who is prodding Chase to look for it? And who is followling her, who is trying to stop her from finding it? + +What things to you need a lot of money to do? + +There's the Stephenson route, a an investor, I could switch Charley to be an investor looking for money. + +Or maybe someone who found a journal at a yard sale? Or maybe Louis finds the journal? So that's your curious person. Then who is the bad person? Is another political figure cliche? What about this guy, not he president but his campaign manager, built on Carl Rove sort of a thing, someone willing to do anything to keep it quiet that his boss has dirty money? But mney from WWII? Who is going to have sat on that money for years, generations even, I think it needs to be rediscovered. But so then who knows about it other than Chase? We're back to why is she being followed. + +Maybe the FBI? They're investigating something and stumble across it? + +Fuck I don't know. Maybe more will just come as I keep writing, but I don't really want to invest too much in Charley as a politian if that's now what he ends up being.... |