Age | Commit message (Collapse) | Author | |
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2011-10-26 | reworked the end of ch 5 with shoe's story about tokyo, also wrote a bit of ↵ | luxagraf | |
the radio signal reveal scene and set up chapter 7 as the trip to florida or jamacia or wherever. | |||
2011-10-24 | fixed some typos and improved the story of shummaker in CH-5 | luxagraf | |
2011-10-24 | fixed early chapters so that Norm and friends are from the Korean war, not WWII | luxagraf | |
2011-10-11 | rewrote chapter 5 to move norm and friends to Korea and round out the ↵ | luxagraf | |
section where Chase looks at the photos. Still needs a bit of polishing on the levin at lenny's but it's getting there | |||
2011-10-06 | added some misc notes to the top of ch 6 | luxagraf | |
2011-10-06 | expanded top of chapter five and added scene with Chase and the leven at ↵ | luxagraf | |
lennys group. Still needs the meet of the scene when Shoe tlks to her near the bathrooms. | |||
2011-10-06 | chapter 4 line edits done | luxagraf | |
2011-10-05 | Finished Chapter 4 with the scene at Steven's house. Moved second scene with ↵ | luxagraf | |
Chase out on the march to chapter 5 and started sketching out the revealing scene in chapter 6 | |||
2011-10-05 | Finished Chapter 4 with the scene at Steven's house. Moved second scene with ↵ | luxagraf | |
Chase out on the march to chapter 5 and started sketching out the revealing scene in chapter 6 | |||
2011-10-05 | added charley scene to cuts for now, til I can work out a spot for him | luxagraf | |
2011-10-05 | changed top of chapter, got rid of politian rearranged Chase and Steven ↵ | luxagraf | |
scene so that they're driving, set him up to help her by looking in the database. | |||
2011-10-04 | added an outline for who is behind hiring Chase | luxagraf | |
2011-10-04 | dumped some unused bits into chapter 5 | luxagraf | |
2011-10-04 | sketched some plot ideas, still unsure on who is following Chase | luxagraf | |
2011-10-04 | rounded out chapter with Chase and Steven at the diner and added a little ↵ | luxagraf | |
chase scene that builds a bit of suspense (hopefully) and sends Chase back out to the house on the bay where she will be collabing with Steven from for the next chapter, the end of which will find her headed to San Diego. | |||
2011-10-04 | added ignore file so vim sessions can vary by machine | luxagraf | |
2011-10-04 | changed file names to make more sense | luxagraf | |
2011-10-04 | initial import | luxagraf | |