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authorluxagraf <sng@luxagraf.net>2020-08-13 16:02:54 -0400
committerluxagraf <sng@luxagraf.net>2020-08-13 16:02:54 -0400
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parent963291a06a43b51cfa545c81df34187494a3bda6 (diff)
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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ And they roam the world at will."
-Robert Service
-#Notes
+# Notes
- Need more details of landscape, sea, and marsh esp.
- household is father, Tambo and his wife, plus Kobayashi.
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Birdie smiled in her hammock. She stretched, lifting her arm out to feel the air
The tk was 39 feet from her bow sprite to rear rail where Lulu's hammock was tied. There were two masts, one just fore of midship and another in the cockpit at the rear. Her father was vague about her origins, though as Birdie understood it, she was built in a place called France, sailed into tk waters where she ran aground. Her cargo was offloaded and she was abandoned to the waves. That was not Poseidon's plan though. The tides had pulled her back out to see. And her father, who happened to be on watch on another merchant ship had spied her. Sensing his chance, he'd woken two companions, sailed along side her and the three trimmed sails of their vessel and jumped ship for the new one.
-One of those companions, Tambo, a tall, powerfully man with skin so black it was almost blue, was walking after now toward Birdie. She hopped out of the hammock, her feet landing on the smoothly worn oak planking of the deck with a light thud.
+One of those companions, Tamba, a tall, powerfully man with skin so black it was almost blue, was walking after now toward Birdie. She hopped out of the hammock, her feet landing on the smoothly worn oak planking of the deck with a light thud.