nearly finished chapter two

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-## intro
-    - marking the pines
-    - description of the swamp
-    - father character
-    - back at camp the fires and tar
-    - night on the beach
-
-## Morning with Birdie rising early
+## intro - Late Spring
+    lulu
+        - marking the pines
+        - description of the swamp
+        - father character
+    birdie
+        - ship in the dunes, kids playing introduce cousins
+        - father and other captain
+    lulu
+        - back at camp the fires and tar
+        - night on the beach
+
+## Morning with Birdie rising early Spring
     - the sea
     - the wind
     - the dunes
     - father doing the gestures, walking the circle, hebrew word for kingdom
+    - starting the fires
+        - discription of tar
     - sails on the horizen
         - unease
-        - she's sent to get 
+        - she's sent to get something
     - ring shout in the woods
         - introduce the slaves on the rice plantation to the south
 
-## ship arrives to careen
+## ???? - into summer
+
+
+## ship arrives to careen Summer
     - anne bonnie
     - the carreening 
     - party
         conversation around the fire that l and b overhear
     - masonic handshakes and symbols
+    - making gum from the chicle plant
 
-## travel to charlestown as a family by boat
+## ???? - End of Summer
+
+## travel to St Augustine as a family by boat
     - end of fall on the beach
-    - description of the city
+    - description of the city (savanah)
     - slave market
     - toys for l and b and h
-
-## On to Savannah and then St Augustine for the winter
-
+    
 ## storm
     - someone dies
+    - Other boat sinks, Samuel and Father die. Or just father
+
+
+## On to St Augustine for the winter
+
+## Sailing north again