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authorluxagraf <sng@luxagraf.net>2021-08-20 20:11:45 -0400
committerluxagraf <sng@luxagraf.net>2021-08-20 20:11:45 -0400
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lbh: changed father to guitar player, made allusion to italy, where the
first six strings were invented around this time
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@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ As Wanderer crested the wave Henry vaulted up the rest of the ladder and landed
"Henry!"
-"Papa".
+"Papa!" He threw his arms around his father as he did every morning.
-"Good morning son! Fine sailing this morning. You want the helm?"
+"Good morning son. Fine sailing today. You want the helm?"
Henry turned around and looked forward. The water was a gray green color, white foam cresting the top of the waves rolling down toward them. The sail was reefed, probably more than it needed to be. "Sure, papa." Henry grabbed the wheel.
-"good boy, steady as she goes. I'm going to give her a bit more sail."
+"Good boy. Steady as she goes. I'm going to give her a bit more sail."
Henry felt Wanderer shudder and shimmy as she road up and over the waves, but he kept her pointed downwind, in line with the swells as much as he could, though there was a sideswell as well that tried to push her to port every third or forth wave.