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 The living room was covered in photos, 8x10 images of young men, most barely old enough to shave, hair recently shorn away, eyes looking innocent, unsure, some frightened. All of them stared up at her from the coffee table, the couch and the floor where they were scattered. Chase curled her legs beneath her and leaned back on the couch. 
 
-She picked up the old squadron Christmas photo Norm Canton had given her. The men were arrayed around a P-29, the workhorse plane of Navy bombing squadrons in WWII as the web had informed her. This particular P-29 had been christened the Emma Jean and bore a stylized image of a woman in a modest, 1940s style bathing suit, presumably Emma Jean, astride a bomb. Someone had hung a Christmas wreath on one of the lower engine cowling flaps. The green and red of the wreath stood out against the dark blue plane, but struck Chase as odd since the rest of the photo made it clear the scene was int he tropics, miles from the nearest wreath-making pine or fir. When Chase looked closer with a magnifying glass, she realized the wreath was actually made from twisted reeds or perhaps banana leaves. 
+She picked up the old squadron Christmas photo Norm Canton had given her. The men were arrayed around a P-29, the workhorse plane of Navy bombing squadrons in WWII. This particular P-29 had been christened the Emma Jean and bore a stylized image of a woman in a modest, 1940s-style bathing suit -- presumably Emma Jean -- astride a bomb. Someone had hung a Christmas wreath on one of the lower engine cowling flaps. The green and red of the wreath stood out against the dark blue plane, but struck Chase as odd since the rest of the photo made it clear the scene was int he tropics, miles from the nearest wreath-making pine or fir. When Chase looked closer with a magnifying glass, she realized the wreath was actually made from twisted reeds or perhaps banana leaves. 
 
-The men in the photo were spread out along one side of the plane, stretching from the propeller in the front all the way along the wing, with a second row with about half as many men kneeling down. Most wore regulation khaki pants. What Chase took to be the officers tended to have on the matching khaki shirts, the rest wore simple white t-shirts, with a few of the men bare chested in the midday sun. Those with uniforms on had rings of sweat under their arms, in the background Chase could see the paltry patches of shade offered by palms and banana trees. 
+The men in the photo were spread out along one side of the plane, stretching from the propeller in the front all the way along the wing, with a second row of men squatting down in from of the first. Nearly everyone in the image wore regulation khaki pants. The men Chase assumed to be the officers had on matching khaki shirts. The rest wore simple white t-shirts, though a few were bare chested in the midday sun. Those with uniforms on had rings of sweat under their arms, in the background Chase could see the paltry patches of shade offered by palms and banana trees. 
 
 She set the photo back on the table and shivered. The house was cold, Chase felt a long way from the tropics and for a moment she almost envied the men in the photo. She wanted to be with them just then, just for a moment, to warm herself and ask a simple question, *excuse me, which one of you is Lt. Lawrence?* The job would be so much simpler with a time machine.
 
-Instead she had to content with forty some odd headshots of service men that might or might not be in the Christmas photograph. Thanks to Steven's willingness to bend some rules and call in a few favors around the department, Chase had enlistment photos for nearly everyone listed on the squadron roster in 1941. Of those she had managed to narrow the field to forty, based on service records. Steven had sent her the forty which she printed out and started comparing to the Christmas photos. She had twenty matches she was sure of, ten more that she considered highly likely and eight more that seemed to look like, but perhaps not as much as she would have liked. That left two for which she had no photo, meaning she had found her mystery man. Twice. 
+Instead she had to contend with forty some odd headshots of servicemen that might or might not be in the Christmas photograph. Thanks to Steven's willingness to bend some rules and call in a few favors around the department, Chase had enlistment photos for nearly everyone listed on the squadron roster in 1941. Of those she had managed to narrow the field to forty, based on service records. Steven had then sent her photos of her forty which she printed out and started comparing to the Christmas photos. She had twenty matches she was sure of, ten more that she considered highly likely and eight more that seemed to look like, but perhaps not as much as she would have liked. That left two for which she had no photo, meaning she had, most likely, found her mystery man. Twice. 
 
 She had already resigned herself to the fact that nothing about this case was going to be easy, nothing about it was going to make sense, but even she had thought for sure this would work. It had seemed so simple, a process of elimination that would finally lead to an image she could then show to survivors. Provided she managed to track down some survivors. But now she had two unidentified men and twice as many questions.
 
-One of the men in question was a short, stocky, dark haired man sitting on the wing of the P-29, legs dangling in the air above the others in the photo. He was one of five that had climbed on the plane, the only one on the wing. At first his presence on the plane led Chase to think perhaps he was her man, since she considered it unlikely that enlisted men, squadron mechanics and like, would be climbing on the wings of the plane. But a bit of searching the net had set her straight. In fact the mechanics were more likely to be on wings than the pilots, who generally seemed to think of their aircrafts not as things, but as extensions of themselves, whereas for the mechanics they were typically birds, or girls, in other words, external things. One could climb on external things, one did not climb up on an extension of one's self. That would be perverse. Or at least that was how Chase had explained it to herself though she admitted that perhaps she was over braining the question. Whatever the underlying reasons, in most photos she found of the era, pilots sat in cockpits, mechanics sat on wings. She also liked this theory because an unidentified mechanic was easier to explain than another unidentified pilot. Steven had already run through all the names in the squadron and failed to come up with another case in the DPMO. That didn't mean there wasn't another POW/MIA case to the squadron, just that so far there was no paperwork. Which again dovetailed with the theory that her mystery man on the wing was a mechanic who perhaps had simply been on loan, or just wandered into the photo for some reason. 
+One of the men in question was a short, stocky, dark haired man sitting on the wing of the P-29, legs dangling in the air above the others in the photo. He was one of five that had climbed on the plane, the only one on the wing. At first his presence on the plane led Chase to think he was her man, since she considered it unlikely that enlisted men, squadron mechanics and like, would be climbing on the wings of the plane. But a bit of searching the net had set her straight. In fact the mechanics were more likely to be on wings than the pilots, who generally seemed to think of their aircrafts not as things, but as extensions of themselves, whereas for the mechanics they were typically birds, or girls, in other words, external things. One could climb on external things, one did not climb up on an extension of one's self. That would be perverse. Or at least that was how Chase had explained it to herself, though she admitted that perhaps she was over braining the question. Whatever the underlying reasons, in most photos she found of the era, pilots sat in cockpits, mechanics sat on wings. She also liked this theory because an unidentified mechanic was easier to explain than another unidentified pilot. Steven had already run through all the names in the squadron and failed to come up with another case in the DPMO. That didn't mean there wasn't another POW/MIA case to the squadron, just that so far there was no paperwork. Which again dovetailed with the theory that her mystery man on the wing was a mechanic who perhaps had simply been on loan, or just wandered into the photo for some reason. 
 
 There was no way to tell for sure the rank of the man on the wing. He was wearing only a strained white T-shirt and had no hint of insignia on him. Even on those men who did look to have lapel pins of some sort, it was nearly impossible to make out a specific rank. She'd even taken the photo down to the basement, dug up her grandfather's old microscope and tried to see if there were more detail to be found at that scale. There wasn't, unless you considered film grain to be detail. She called up a friend of Steven's in the tech department and sent him a scan to see what he could enhance it somehow. He had laughed hysterically and all but hung up on her, which she took as a no.
 
-That was the point at which she had give up. She had put the image away for a while and went for a walk down the road to Duncan's place. Duncan had invited her in for a cup of coffee and she had recounted her mother's adventures in Las Vegas for Duncan and his wife Eileen. Thus far anyway, since, as Chase told them over a second cup, she thought there was a decent chance her mother wasn't coming home at all. She sat out on the deck with her neighbors and watched the sun sink down over the mainland. Eventually she wandered back down the road in the dwindling Friday evening light and went back to her pictures. 
+After that she decided she was due for a break so put the image away for a while and took a walk. She walked the road, looking over the houses. Eventually she found herself standing in front of Duncan's house, talking to his wife Eileen who insisted she come in for a cup of coffee. Chase filled the couple in on her mother's adventures in Las Vegas and even let it slip that she was beginning to suspect her mother wasn't coming home. She ended up spending most of the afternoon out on the deck with her neighbors, watching the sun sink down over the mainland. Eventually she wandered back down the road in the dwindling Friday evening light and went back to her pictures. 
 
-The second unknown man in the image was squatting down in the very front. He had sandy hair swept back with pomade. His smile leaped out of the photo in a way that made Chase seriously doubt he was the sort of man anyone would forget. She certainly would not have forgotten him. He looked a bit older than the rest of the men and even in a white T-shirt he conveyed a sense of authority, whether or not that meant an actual rank Chase didn't know. Of the two though, this one struck her as a Reese Lawrence more so than the man of the wing.
+The second unknown man in the image was squatting down in the very front. He had sandy hair swept back with pomade. His smile leaped out of the photo in a way that made Chase seriously doubt he was the sort of man anyone would forget. She certainly would not have forgotten him. He looked a bit older than the rest of the men and even in a white T-shirt he conveyed a sense of authority. Whether or not that meant an actual rank Chase didn't know. Of the two though, this one struck her as a Reese Lawrence more so than the man of the wing.
 
 Chase was suddenly overwhelmed with exhaustion. She had been doing nothing but poring over the photos for the better part of three days. She took off her glasses and pinched the bridge of her nose. She got up and opened the fridge looking for something to eat. There wasn't much, save the Chinese takeout she had ordered two days ago. For the most part she was subsisting on boiled eggs, spinach salad and wine. She pulled out the Chinese and a half-full bottle of Rose. She flopped down on the couch, pulled out the cork with her teeth and drank from the bottle. The only way to drink Rose she thought with a smile.
 
-So there were two photo to pass around. That wasn't so bad she had told herself last night when she finally admitted she wasn't going to narrow the field any more. Unfortunately Steven had called her very excited at eight in the morning the next day, that was this morning she thought with a start. Steven had somehow managed to learn that the note in Lt. Lawrence's very skinny, unhelpful file had been written on a smallish lined yellow notepad manufactured for over thirty years by a paper company from Seattle. He was very vague as to how he had tracked it down, which made Chase suspect perhaps he was stretching the truth a bit, but she was nevertheless vaguely impressed. Initially she was inclined to dismiss the information since the thirty year window Steven had found did not help narrow down who might have once had the file. But then Steven pointed out that, while it was unlikely she'd ever know who had put the note in the file she did know that apparently the DPMO had not started looking into Lt. Lawrence until the mid to late 1970s. In other words, it was unlikely any family had been pestering the department after the war. In other words, it was unlikely that anyone had missed Lt. Lawrence. It was unlikely there would be many people to show her two photos to.
+So there were two photos to pass around. That wasn't so bad she reasoned. And Steven had provided another clue earlier that more when he called her up breathlessly rattled off a store about the yellow paper that Chase had trouble following. Chase managed to slow him down long enough to learn the gist, which was that Steven had somehow managed to learn that the note in Lt. Lawrence's very skinny, unhelpful file had been written on a smallish lined yellow notepad manufactured for over thirty years by a paper company from Seattle. He was very vague as to how he had tracked that info down, which made Chase suspect perhaps he was stretching the truth a bit, but she was nevertheless vaguely impressed. She would have been more impressed if the window of time wasn't thirty years. She had already dismissed the information since a thirty year window did not help narrow down who might have once had the file, but then Steven pointed out that, while it was unlikely she'd ever know who had put the note in the file, she did know that apparently the DPMO had not started looking into Lt. Lawrence until the mid to late 1970s. In other words, it was unlikely any family had been pestering the department after the war, looking for information on their missing son or brother or husband or father. It was, in short, unlikely that anyone had missed Lt. Lawrence. That also meant there was unlikely to be many people who knew what he looked like. That bit of information had derailed Chase's plan.
 
-The wine began to warm her belly. She reached over and turned on the lamp by the window and watched her reflection in the dark glass. On one hand the absence of relatives made her job harder. There was no one to track down, no one to interview, no one to produce War Department telegrams with dates and other helpful information. There were fewer data point to place on the timeline. On the other hand the fact that no one appeared to have missed Lt. Lawrence made the case even more intriguing. Here, thought Chase, was a story that truly needed saving, a person who had vanished, leaving hardly a trace of their existence behind.
+The wine began to warm her belly. She reached over and turned on the lamp by the window and watched her reflection in the dark glass. On one hand the absence of relatives made her job harder. There was no one to track down, no one to interview, no one to produce War Department telegrams with dates and other helpful information. There were fewer data points to place on the timeline. On the other hand the fact that no one appeared to have missed Lt. Lawrence made the case even more intriguing. Here, thought Chase, was a story that truly needed saving, a person who had vanished, leaving hardly a trace of their existence behind.
 
-The wine made Chase restless. She opened the back door and went out on the deck. It was a lovely night, crisp and clear. She stared up at the Big Dipper, followed Orion's belt down, her eye draw to the faint purple hint of light and city on the far western horizon. She drank more of the wine, sat down in the white plastic chair she had previously pulled out of the basement. She could smell the Potomac, she thought about the river, somewhere further up the bay, running all the way from the Pennsylvania mountains, perhaps even further she reasoned, though she knew from a few camping trips as a child that river ran through the hills north of Pittsburgh. It ran all the way down to here, where it was swallowed up by the Chesapeake Bay and drug out to sea. All that water disappearing into so much more water. All these people disappearing somewhere, disappearing into so much water, so much time.
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-The chime of her phone broke the peaceful still of the night. She pulled out her phone and looked down. It was a number she did not know. She shivered and went inside to find her sweater. 
+The wine made Chase restless. It was quiet late, but she brought up Norm Canton's number and recorded a brief message asking him to meet her for breakfast the following morning. She told her phone to send it straight to voicemail.
 
+She opened the back door and went out on the deck. It was a lovely night, crisp and clear. She stared up at the Big Dipper, followed Orion's belt down, her eye draw to the faint purple hint of light and city on the far western horizon. She drank more of the wine, sat down in the white plastic chair she had previously pulled out of the basement. She could smell the Potomac, she thought about the river, somewhere further up the bay, running all the way from the Pennsylvania mountains, perhaps even further she reasoned, though she knew from a few camping trips as a child that river ran through the hills north of Pittsburgh. It ran all the way down to here, where it was swallowed up by the Chesapeake Bay and drug out to sea. All that water disappearing into so much more water. All these people disappearing somewhere, disappearing into so much water, so much time.
 
 
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-It was still chilly the next morning when Chase packed her bags and threw them in the car. Her numbed fingers fumbled with the keys as she locked the door. And hour earlier she had managed to reach Norm and he had been kind enough to not only agree to see her, but invite her to brunch with the 'leven and lenny's as he had called it, which, from what she gathered was a meeting of eleven or so people at a Denny's on the outskirts of Annapolis, down by the bay. Norm suggested she come since there would several other men from the 234th there and his friend Ed Wald, not a regular member, would nevertheless be on hand this morning.
+It was still chilly the next morning. Chase dropped the keys twice trying to lock the front door, her numbed fingers fumbling with the cold metal. Just an hour earlier Norm Canton had woken her up to say that not only could he do breakfast, but if she was game she could sit in with the 'leven at lenny's group. From what she gathered the 'leven at lenny's group was a meeting of eleven or so people at a Denny's on the outskirts of Annapolis, down by the bay. Norm suggested she come since there would several other men from the 234th on hand that morning.
 
 The Denny's was, as Norm had said, probably the nicest Denny's she had ever seen. The parking lot backed up against the highway, but inside the usually drab brown and yellow decor of Denny's was considerably improved by virtue of a spectacular view out over the north end of the Annapolis harbor where hundreds of ships were berthed in slips leading well away from the shore, a series of wooden dock that extended out as far as Chase could see. Once a fan of Denny's, back in her hard drinking, greasy food craving hangover days, Chase had, along with most everyone else under 65, realized that Denny's was incompatible with the figure she liked to keep. At some point though, to judge by the group of the men Norm introduced her to, one stops caring so much about the size of one's waistline and, presumably, re-embraces Denny's.
 
@@ -55,7 +54,7 @@ Shoe turned away and flagged down a waitress for some more coffee. "And maybe so
 
 She nodded thinking about Norm's lecture. "I know the gist of it, North and South, divided still on what was the front right?"
 
-Shoe nodded, "more or less I suppose. Did you know the war never ended? Most people assume there was truce or an armistice or something, but there wasn't, just a little cease fire agreement. That's why we still have a massive military presence in Korea. You go over there some time, go up to the DMZ and have a look. That war is still going on, you have to see to understand. Might be that no one is shooting right now, but the war is definitely still going." Shoe was staring at his coffee, appearing to drift off somewhere. "Where was I? Oh, right," he smiled and glanced around the table. "It was late in the war, maybe two weeks before the ceasefire. We never really knew what was happening on the ground, but for us it had been weeks since any serious anti-aircraft guns had been firing. Partly maybe because we had backed of the bombing so the diplomats would look better at the ceasefire talks. Maybe it was partly because the gunners knew the talks were happening too. If they don't fire no one knows where they are, no one calls in an air strike. The other guy wants to live too you see... not just me, that's what I learned over there, the only people that want a war are the people that don't have to go to it." Shoe laughed bitterly. Chase glanced around the table and noticed that the other conversations had stopped. The rest of the men were nodding along with Shoe. 
+Shoe nodded, "more or less I suppose. Did you know the war never ended? Most people assume there was truce or an armistice or something, but there wasn't, just a little cease fire agreement. That's why we still have a massive military presence in Korea. You go over there some time, go up to the DMZ and have a look. That war is still going on, you have to see to understand. Might be that no one is shooting right now, but the war is definitely still going." Shoe was staring at his coffee, appearing to drift off somewhere. "Where was I? Oh, right," he smiled and glanced around the table. "It was late in the war, maybe two weeks before the ceasefire. We never really knew what was happening on the ground, but for us it had been weeks since any serious anti-aircraft guns had been firing. Maybe because we had backed of the bombing so the diplomats would look better at the ceasefire talks. Maybe it was because the gunners knew the talks were happening too. If they don't fire no one knows where they are, no one calls in an air strike. The other guy wants to live too you see... not just me, that's what I learned over there, the only people that want a war are the people that don't have to go to it." Shoe laughed bitterly. Chase glanced around the table and noticed that the other conversations had stopped. The rest of the men were nodding along with Shoe. 
 
 "Jets came in in Korea you know? We were still flying propeller planes, turbo props they called them at this point. But the jets were faster and those jet boys were pulling all the bombing missions late in the war. Toward the end, even before the ceasefire talk started we stopped doing any bombing, they had us dropping leaflets. You know, little propaganda flyers we'd spread all over the hills, try to convince them to throw down their weapons. Stupid assignment, god I hated those mail runs. Hell of a thing to risk your life for, some paper. Mind you, we knew that paper was just going to wind up shit smeared in woods anyway. I'da preferred the fuckers used leaves. Pardon my French. But I dunno, maybe it worked. Maybe it did something. I mean it's not like there was much else. Radio I guess, but the more isolated troops, the ones dug into the valleys, they weren't going to get any radio up in the mountains. It's not like we had all these phones and gadgets you kids have today. We didn't have all that see?" He leaned into Chase and gently elbowed her in the ribs.
 
@@ -65,7 +64,7 @@ Shoe nodded, "more or less I suppose. Did you know the war never ended? Most peo
 
 Chase raised her eyebrows. But Shoe seemed to have not even considered what Chase was thinking about. 
 
-"The stick is important, but you have to work your feet too, see. There are two pedals down there for your feet, stomp on the right one you go right, stomp on the left one you go left. Pretty simple right? Well we're out this day flying somewhere over North Korea. Anyway someone took a potshot at me. Probably with a fucking hunting rifle or something, pardon my French young lady. Anyway this son of a, this--guy gets lucky and puts a bullet into my plane. Blasts into the engine, cuts some hoses and then ricochets back and blows right through my left foot. Well, actually they never could tell me if it was the bullet that went through my foot or some piece of metal it tore lose. Either way it hurt like a son of a bitch and all I know is one second I'm fine, headed home to the ship and then next I'm half blind for smoke and there's a hole in my foot. Not good. Truth be told, we'd all dropped our guards a little bit at this point because the talks were actually happening, rumor had it we would be out of there in a few days. I mean, that was the end right? Turned out that was true, but anyway... Still, flying is dangerous in and of itself, but shit, after you've been shot at while flying for three years flying with hardly anyone shooting at you seems like a piece of cake. Until someone decides to shoot at you again."
+"The stick is important, but you have to work your feet too, see. There are two pedals down there for your feet, stomp on the right one you go right, stomp on the left one you go left. Pretty simple right?" Shoe chuckled. "well, I mean it's a good idea to practice that a bit before you head off on your own into that wild blue yonder." Chase noticed the rest of the table was looking at her smiling. "Well we're out this day flying somewhere over North Korea, and some asshole takes a potshot at me. Probably with a fucking hunting rifle or something, pardon my French young lady. Anyway this son of a, this--guy gets lucky and puts a bullet into my plane. Blasts into the engine, cuts some hoses and then ricochets back and blows right through my left foot. Well, actually they never could tell me if it was the bullet that went through my foot or some piece of metal it tore lose. Either way it hurt like a son of a bitch and all I know is one second I'm fine, headed home to the ship and then next I'm half blind from smoke and there's a hole in my foot. Not good."
 
 Chase instinctively glanced under the table, but he was, naturally, wearing shoes. "I take it you made it back okay?"
 
@@ -79,7 +78,7 @@ Chase glanced around and noticed that everyone was nodding. Shoe's story was cle
 
 "So then what happened?"
 
-"Well, I have a hole in my foot at this point and that's making it very difficult to steer the plane. The engine is leaking oil, pressure gauges are spinning like tops and I've lost my radio. So Canton here, he's using hand signals, trying to find out what the hell is wrong with me. We drop back a bit and fly lower, heading into a cloud so we hide the smoke. It's one thing to fly over people that are tired of war, it's another thing to limp along trailing smoke. That draws fire from event he most uninspired troops. But I manage to fly her back, one-footed. I tell you what, I was never so glad to see a ship as that day. We dropped down out of clouds just off the coast and then there's The Mighty Kay, *the Kearsarge*, turning into the wind... Man, I still remember that feeling, that feeling of wow, I'm going to make it. So then I have to come in on my own, no one to call the ball, nothing but flags, but I managed to hook the third wire, damn near perfect landing." Shoe broke into a smile and everyone at the table began laughing.
+"Well, I have a hole in my foot at this point and that's making it very difficult to steer the plane. The engine is leaking oil, pressure gauges are spinning like tops and I've lost my radio. So Canton here, he's using hand signals, trying to find out what the hell is wrong with me. We drop back a bit and fly lower, heading into a cloud so we hide the smoke. It's one thing to fly over people that are tired of war, it's another thing to limp along trailing smoke. That draws fire from even the most uninspired troops. But I manage to fly her back, one-footed. I tell you what, I was never so glad to see a ship as that day. We dropped down out of clouds just off the coast and then there's The Mighty Kay, *the Kearsarge*, turning into the wind... Man, I still remember that feeling, that feeling of wow, I'm going to make it. So then I have to come in on my own, no one to call the ball, nothing but flags, but I managed to hook the third wire, damn near perfect landing." Shoe broke into a smile and everyone at the table began laughing.
 
 "What?"
 
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ Chase glanced around and noticed that everyone was nodding. Shoe's story was cle
 
 "Did he?"
 
-Norm took a sip of coffee. "squadron commander was shot down two days later in almost the same area." The merriment at the table had died down as the waitress cleared away their plates. "So yeah, Shoe flew again," said Norm quietly.
+Norm took a sip of coffee. "Squadron commander was shot down two days later in almost the same area," said Norm quietly. The merriment at the table had died down as the waitress cleared away their plates. "I guess he forgot to write that order down, because Shoe did fly again. He was a test pilot out at Edwards after the war. Yeah, Shoe flew again," 
 
 Chased listened politely to few more stories, most of which did not involve the war in any way. Gradually the men began to leave, all of them making sure to shake Chase's hand before they did. Eventually it was just Norm, Chase and Shoe. 
 
@@ -97,11 +96,11 @@ Chased listened politely to few more stories, most of which did not involve the
 
 Shoe guffawed, "well, you've met me. Still want my help?"
 
-"Very much so." Chase drew the photo out of her purse and slid it across the new empty table. "I need to know who these men are, the one circled in the photo?"
+"Very much so." Chase drew the photo out of her purse and slid it across the new empty table. "I need to know who these men are? The ones circled, there, down in the front."
 
 Shoe fished his glasses from the pocket of his flannel shirt and slowly unfolded them, all the while looking at the photo. He flipped it over. "Christmas 1941," he read aloud. Shoe glanced over at her and then turned the photo back over and studied the image for a while before glancing up, over the rims of the glasses at Norm. "I don't recognize any of these men, hard to tell cause they're pretty small and my eyes aren't the best, but this is well before my time."
 
-"Yes, I'm aware of that," The three of them had spread out in the booth after everyone else left, now Chase slid back across the both to Shoe's side. She looked down at the photo. "Norm told me though that you might know some of the men from the old days, men that were with the squadron in WWII..."
+"Yes, I'm aware of that," She looked down at the photo. "Norm told me though that you might know some of the men from the old days, men that were with the squadron during WWII..."
 
 Shoe took off his glasses and set them down on the photo. He rubbed his eyes. "I do know a few of them. Or I did, most of them are dead now Chase, it's been over seventy years."
 
@@ -109,5 +108,23 @@ Norm excused himself to the restroom. The waitress filled Chase's coffee again.
 
 Chase told him about the DPMO and what she did. She did not tell him anything about the peculiarities of the case. She was careful not to lie, rather she just omitted a few details. As with all the veterans she had met the idea that anyone cared enough to track down their comrades, even if they themselves had never known them. 
 
-Shoe nodded his head, staring down at the empty cup on coffee on the Formica in front of him. He glanced over at the bathroom and then back at Chase. "I have heard the name once." Shoe glanced again at the bathroom. "Just once, but I remember it because it was odd. I was in Tokyo, five us had be granted some leave... would have been '53 I believe. Major Willis, our commanding officer at the time, I was shot down and killed about two weeks later." Shoe paused, spun the cup in his fingers. "He and O'Hearn and I, we were at a, um, a bathhouse. Don't tell my wife." Shoe smiled weakly at Chase. "So the way those things worked, you got your girl, went off to a private bath and then when you were finished you came back and you could sit in a kind of steam room. Well the room my girl took me to was right next to the steam room. We go about our business and we're lying in the bath after, just luxuriating you might say," She smiled at her. " I remember lying there in the warm water, listening to the Major and O'Hearn tromping down the hall into the steam room., All the walls in Tokyo, they're made out of rice paper you know?" Show shook his head. "Anyway my girl said something to me and I couldn't hear exactly what O'Hearn said, but it ended with 'you mean like Lawrence...' and the next thing I know the Major and O'Hearn come crashing through the wall, both of them naked, the Major trying to strangle O'Hearn. I had to separate them like children. And of course I was naked too so it should have been hilarious, but it wasn't. And that's what I remember. Neither one of them would say a word to me or each other for the rest of the day." Shoe leaned back in the booth, stretched both arms over his head and then slumped forward with a heavy sigh. "That's probably not much help I know, but that's what I remember. But I have something even better for you. I could take you down to talk to O'Hearn. He turned 95 this year and I don't know how much of him is still left or if he'd want to talk about it, but we could try if you like. I've always wondered what that was about, wouldn't mind knowing myself."
+Shoe nodded his head, staring down at the empty cup on coffee on the Formica in front of him. He glanced over at the bathroom and then back at Chase. "I have heard the name once." Shoe glanced again at the bathroom. "Just once, but I remember it because it was odd. Damn strange I mean. I was in Tokyo, five or six of us had been granted some leave... would have been '53 I believe. Major Willis, our commanding officer at the time, he was shot down and killed about two weeks later, but he had been with the squad from the beginning, all through the Pacific, all the way back to this photo I bet." Shoe paused, Chase was nodding.
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+"I don't recall which one he is, but he is in that photo."
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+Shoe nodded. "O'Hearn was the other fellow with me and Willis. I don't think O'Hearn was probably in that photo, but he was definitely there for most of the Pacific war. Never could figure out why he stuck around, guess he just liked flying, didn't seem to mind being shot at even." Shoe spun his empty coffee cup gently on the saucer. "So Willis and O'Hearn and I, we were at a, um, a bathhouse." Shoe smiled weakly at Chase. "Don't tell my wife."
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+"I wouldn't dream of it."
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+Shoe nodded. "I'm sure she suspects worse. Anyway, the way those things worked, you got your girl, went off to a private bath and then when you were finished you came back and you could sit in a kind of steam room. Well the room my girl took me to was right next to the steam room. We go about our business and we're lying in the bath after, just luxuriating you might say," She smiled at her. " I remember lying there in the warm water, listening to the Major and O'Hearn tromping down the hall into the steam room., All the walls in Tokyo, they're made out of rice paper you know?" Shoe shook his head. "Anyway my girl said something to me and I couldn't hear exactly what O'Hearn said, but it ended with 'you mean like Lawrence...' and the next thing I know the Major and O'Hearn come crashing through the wall, both of them naked, the Major trying to strangle O'Hearn. I had to separate them like children. And of course I was naked too so it should have been hilarious, but it wasn't. And that's what I remember. Neither one of them would say a word to me or each other for the rest of the day." Shoe leaned back in the booth, stretched both arms over his head and then slumped forward with a heavy sigh. "That's probably not much help I know, but that's what I remember." 
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+Shoe clearly wasn't finished, but he paused, looking at Chase with what she imagined must have once been quite a sparkle in his mischievous eyes. "My memories might not be much help, but lucky for you I can do one better. I could take you down to talk to O'Hearn."
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+Chase grinned. Norm had already told her that Shoe would take her to see O'Hearn, but he'd insisted that the key to getting Shoe to do anything was to make him feel like it was all his idea. Now that she'd seen it all come around she couldn't suppress a little laugh.
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+"Now, O'Hearn," continued Show, "he turned, must be, I don't know, must be about 95 by now, so I don't know how much of him is still left or if he'll even want to talk about this stiff, but we could try if you like. I've always wondered what that was about myself."
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+"You've been wondering much longer than me Mr. Shummaker, but I'd love to come with you."
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+"Please, no one calls me that. It's just Shoe."
 
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+Truth be told, we'd all dropped our guards a little bit at this point because the talks were actually happening, rumor had it we would be out of there in a few days. I mean, that was the end right? Turned out that was true, but anyway... Still, flying is dangerous in and of itself, but shit, after you've been shot at while flying for three years flying with hardly anyone shooting at you seems like a piece of cake. Until someone decides to shoot at you again.
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 For every man he pointed out, Norm had a story; Dory the mechanic who had dropped a thousand pound bomb on the runway causing the entire airfield to evacuate or the time Ed Wald, who figure prominently into a number of the tales, had snuck into the base hospital and made off with two tanks of nitrous oxide to liven up the new years party. Chase tagged Wald in a photo and made a note that she would interview him at some point.